3.6 Internal Email Direct Approach Editing Practice

In 3.3, you reviewed a scenario to develop an audience profile for an email about Learn Canada Vacations’ planned event. Using your audience profile, revise the poorly written message below to improve the format, organization, tone, and grammar.

Exercises

Activity: Revise the internal email.

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