3.9 External Email Direct Approach Editing Practice
Exercises
Activity: Use your revising, editing, and proofreading skills to improve the content and format of the email.
Sent: September 14, 20xx 2:25 PM
To: <snardone@supperhelper.ca>
Subject: Information about your supper services
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Hiya Sandra:
Please send me more information about your companys services. My husband and me are both busy professionals we do not have time to cook but we want our 3 children to eat healthy food. I especailly would like answer to the following question.
When you provide meals for families are they in one container or in separate serving? Can you accommodate a gluten-free diet? That is important to I since I have celiac disease? Are the vegetable dishes tasty and attractive two of my kids hate vegetables. Are the ingredients ethically sources and organic? We would be needing meals 2 times a week on mondays and Wednesday. Please respond to my questions. Also send me a menu. So that I can compare you’re products to these from Suppers to Go. I like to weigh the pro’s and con’s ofe each, before I make a decision.
Sylvia Smith
123 Glenview Dr
Scarborough, ON, M7H 2H1
416 289 5200