3.14 Indirect Approach: Editing Practice

In the following activities, you will have a chance to apply the indirect approach, keeping in mind audience, purpose, tone, and organization as previously covered.

Exercises

Activity 1: Use the indirect approach to improve this persuasive email. Pay attention to word choice and sentence style.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

Exercises

Activity 2: Reorganize and correct the grammatical and sentence choice errors in this messy email that denies a refund.

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