3.9 External Email Direct Approach Editing Practice

Applying the concepts from 3.3 and 3.4, revise the poorly written message below, adapting where necessary for an external audience. 

Exercises

Activity: Use your revising, editing, and proofreading skills to improve the content and format of the email.

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