5.3: Proofreading for Punctuation

Learning Objectives

1. Identify and correct punctuation errors involving commas, apostrophes, colons and semicolons, parentheses and brackets, quotation marks, hyphens and dashes, question and exclamation marks, and periods.

2. Plan, write, revise, and edit short documents and messages that are organized, complete, and tailored to specific audiences.

As the little marks added between words, punctuation is like a system of traffic signs: it guides the reader towards the intended meaning of the words just as road signs guide drivers to their destination. They tell the reader when to go, when to pause, when to stop, when to go again, when to pay close attention, and when to turn (Truss, 2003, p. 7). They’re also crucial for avoiding accidents. A paragraph without punctuation—no periods, commas, apostrophes, etc.—quickly spins out into utter nonsense and kills the reader’s understanding of the writer’s meaning.

Punctuation that’s merely missing or unnecessary here and there can confuse a reader and even lead to expensive lawsuits if they plague contentious documents like contracts. To anyone who knows how to use them, seeing punctuation mistakes in someone else’s writing makes that other person look sloppy and amateurish. Punctuation errors by adult native English speakers look especially bad because they reflect poorly on their education and attention to detail, especially if they’re habitual mistakes. The critical reader looks down on anyone who hasn’t figured out how to use their own language in their 20+ years of immersion in it. Not knowing the difference between a colon and semicolon, for instance, is like not knowing the difference between a cucumber and a zucchini; sure they look alike from a distance, but they’re completely different species and serve different culinary functions. If you don’t know these differences by the time you’re an adult, however, it doesn’t take much to learn.

In this section, we focus on how to spot and correct common punctuation errors, starting with commas because most problems with people’s writing in general are related to missing and misused commas. The goal is to help you avoid making mistakes that can potentially embarrass you in the eyes of people who should be taking you seriously.

Complete List of Punctuation Covered in this Chapter Section

5.3.1: Commas

Most punctuation problems are comma-related because of the important role commas play in providing readers with guidance on how a sentence is organized and is to be read to understand the writer’s intended meaning. As we saw in §4.3.2, commas signal to the reader where one clause ends and another begins in compound and complex sentences, but they serve several other roles as well. We use commas in four general ways, each with several variations and special cases. To these we can add rules about where not to add commas, since many writers confuse their readers by putting commas where they shouldn’t go. Most style guides advocate for using as few commas as possible, though you certainly must use them wherever needed to avoid ambiguities that lead readers astray. Closely follow the sixteen rules below to guide your reader towards your intended meaning and avoid confusing them with comma misplacement.

Quick Rules: Commas

Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common comma errors associated with each one.

Comma Rule 1.1 Put a comma before coordinating conjunctions in compound sentences.
The installers came to do their work at 8am, and the regulators came to inspect the installation by the end of the day.
Comma Rule 1.2 Don’t put a comma between independent clauses in a compound sentence if not followed by a coordinating conjunction.
Our main concern is patient safety; we don’t want any therapeutic intervention to cause harm. (semicolon rather than a comma after “safety”)
Comma Rule 2.1 Put a comma after introductory subordinate clauses, phrases, or words preceding main clauses.
If we can’t secure investor funding and launch the site by April, the clients will likely go elsewhere.
Comma Rule 2.2 Don’t put a comma after main clauses followed by subordinate clauses or phrases unless the latter strikes a contrast with the former.
They’re paying us a visit because they haven’t seen us in a while. (no comma before “because”)
Comma Rule 3.1 Put commas around parenthetical words, phrases, or clauses.
See my portfolio, which includes my best work, on ArtStation.
Comma Rule 3.2 Put a comma before contrasting coordinate elements, end-of-sentence shifts, and omitted repetitions.
He said, “go to Customer Service, not the checkout,” didn’t he?
Comma Rule 3.3 Put a comma before sentence-ending free-modifier phrases that describe elements at the beginning or middle of sentences.
We are putting in long hours on the report, writing frantically.
Comma Rule 3.4 Put commas around higher levels of organization in dates, places, addresses, names, and numbers.
Send your ticket to Gina Kew, RN, in Ottawa, Ontario, by Tuesday, October 9, 2018, for your chance to win the $5,000,000 prize.
Comma Rule 3.5 Put a comma between a signal phrase and a quotation.
The reporter replied, “Yes, this is strictly off the record.”
Comma Rule 3.6 Don’t put commas around restrictive relative clauses (before that).
The purchased item that we agreed to return is now completely lost. (no comma before “that” and after “return”)
Comma Rule 3.7 Don’t put commas between subjects and their predicates.
The just reward for the difficult and dangerous job that Kyle performed for his clientele was the knowledge that they were safe. (no comma before “was”)
Comma Rule 4.1 Put commas between each item in a series, including the last two items.
You must be kind, conscientious, and caring in this line of work.
Comma Rule 4.2 Put commas between two or more coordinate adjectives.
It was a cool, crisp, bright autumn morning.
Comma Rule 4.3 Don’t put a comma after the final coordinate adjective.
The team devised a daring, ambitious plan. (no comma after “ambitious”)
Comma Rule 4.4 Don’t put a comma between non-coordinate adjectives.
David played his Candy Apple Red ’57 reissue Fender Stratocaster electric guitar like he was flying a Saturn V rocket to the moon. (no comma between the non-coordinate adjectives throughout)
Comma Rule 4.5 Don’t put commas between two coordinate nouns or verbs.
Tesla and Edison invented and patented a complete circuit of electricity distribution systems and consumption devices. (no commas before any “and” here)

Extended Comma Explanations

 

For more on commas, see the following resources:

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5.3.2: Apostrophes

Apostrophes are mainly used to indicate possession and contraction but are probably the most misplaced punctuation mark after commas. They can embarrass the writer who misuses them, show a lack of attention to detail, and confuse readers about whether a noun is singular or plural, possessive, a contraction, or just a misspelling. Used properly, apostrophes at the end of a noun cue readers that the noun following is possessed by what the noun preceding refers to. For instance, in “Uncle Tom’s cabin,” the apostrophe indicates that the cabin (noun) is owned by Uncle Tom. Placement of apostrophes before or after the s ending a word determines if the noun is plural or singular. They’re also used for contractions in informal writing such as you see at the beginning of this sentence. You have four main rules to follow when using apostrophes, as well as several special cases.

Quick Rules: Apostrophes

Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common apostrophe errors associated with each one.

Apostrophe Rule 1.1 Put an apostrophe before the s ending a singular possessive noun.Jenna’s goal is to find a money manager who can diversify her portfolio.
Apostrophe Rule 1.2 Don’t put an apostrophe at the end of a simple plural noun.Corben put on his glasses to see the looks on their faces. (no apostrophe at the end of “glasses,” “looks,” or “faces”).
Apostrophe Rule 2.1 Put an apostrophe after the s ending a plural possessive noun.All three companies’ bids for the contract were rejected.
Apostrophe Rule 2.2 Don’t put an apostrophe before the s ending a non-possessive plural decade.The corporation was in the black back in the 1940s. (no apostrophe between the 0 and s in “1940s”)
Apostrophe Rule 3 Put an apostrophe where letters are omitted in contractions.You’re saying that it’s not a mistake if they’re doing it twice?
Apostrophe Rule 4 Put an apostrophe before a plural s following single lettersMind your p’s and q’s, son.

Extended Apostrophe Explanations

 

For more on apostrophes, see the following resources:

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5.3.3: Colons

Colon and semicolonColons and semicolons are often confused because of the similarities in both their names and form, though they perform quite different punctuation roles. A colon looks like a period stacked on top of another and is mainly used to equate information on either side of it somewhat like an equals sign (=) in math. A semicolon, on the other hand, looks like a period stacked on top of a comma. The semicolon usually separates independent clauses from one another in a compound sentence as an alternative to using a comma and a conjunction. They both have additional specific uses as we shall see below, starting with the colon.

Quick Rules: Colons

Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common colon errors associated with each one.

Colon Rule 1.1 Put a colon at the end of a clause or phrase introducing a list.
NASA built six space shuttles: Enterprise, Columbia, Challenger, Discovery, Atlantis, and Endeavour.
Colon Rule 1.2 Put a colon at the end of an opening salutation in formal emails and letters.
Dear Ms. O’Reilly:
Colon Rule 2.1 Put a colon between an explanation and its introductory independent clause.
The error in our prototype led to the solution of quite another problem: how to stabilize the transducer.
Colon Rule 2.2 Put a colon between a quotation and its introductory independent clause if the latter is a complete sentence.
What they were actually saying was much simpler: “Either give us the money up front, or we won’t install the program.”
Colon Rule 2.3 Don’t put a colon before a list or explanation preceded by a fragment.
Their three best albums are Fully Completely, Day for Night, and Trouble at the Henhouse. (no colon after “are”)
Colon Rule 3.1 Put a colon between a main title and its subtitle.
In the Realm of Hungry Ghosts: Close Encounters with Addiction
Colon Rule 3.2 Put a colon between publisher locations and names in bibliographical references.
Toronto: Nelson
Colon Rule 3.3 Put a colon between numbers in ratios and times.
There’s a 3:1 chance that the experiment will end before the 8:23:40 mark.

Extended Colon Explanations

 

For more on colons, see the following resources:

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5.3.4: Semicolons

semicolon and colonSemicolons and colons are often confused because of the similarities in both their names and form, though they perform quite different punctuation roles. A semicolon looks like a period stacked on top of a comma and is mainly used to separate independent clauses from one another in a compound sentence as an alternative to using a comma and a conjunction. A colon, on the other hand, looks like a period stacked atop another and is mainly used to equate information on either side of it somewhat like an equals sign (=) in math. They both have additional specific uses as we saw above with colons in §5.3.3 above and will now see with semicolons.

Quick Rules: Semicolons

Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common semicolon errors associated with each one.

Semicolon Rule 1 Put a semicolon between related independent clauses to make a compound sentence.Yes, we finished the marketing report you asked for; it’s printed and bound in your departmental mailbox.
Semicolon Rule 2 Put a semicolon between sub-lists in a series of lists in a sentence.Italicize words, phrases, and clauses for emphasis or when you refer to them as such; the titles of books, albums, feature-length films, and websites; and ships, named aircraft, and other named vehicles.
Semicolon Rule 3 Don’t put a semicolon where a colon should be used.We can be thankful for what Oscar taught us: that being kind to our canine companions brings immense joy to our lives. (colon used after “us” to set up an explanation, not a semicolon)

Extended Semicolon Explanations

 

For more on semicolons, see the following resources:

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5.3.5: Parentheses

parentheses and bracketsParentheses are often confused with brackets because they look alike and perform similar functions. Parentheses are curved lines that surround qualifying, non-essential elements, whereas brackets are squared, open-ended boxes used for very specific parenthetical situations. Let’s take a closer look at the occasions for which we would use parentheses rather than brackets or even commas.

Quick Rules: Parentheses

Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common parentheses errors associated with each one.

Parentheses Rule 1.1 Put parentheses around qualifying interjections of lesser importance within and between sentences. He put the folder (the green one, not the blue) in the filing cabinet thinking it was a client file rather than an administrative one.
Parentheses Rule 1.2 Don’t use parentheses where parenthetical commas would do. He put the green folder, not the blue one, in the filing cabinet. (commas used instead of parentheses)
Parentheses Rule 2 Put parentheses around in-text citations crediting research sources in APA and MLA documentation styles. Cellphones are giving youths neck and back problems typically seen in much older people (Cuéllar & Lanman, 2017).

Extended Parentheses Explanations

 

For more on parentheses, see the following resources:

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5.3.6: Brackets

brackets and parenthesesBrackets are often confused with parentheses because they look alike and perform similar functions. Brackets are squared open-ended boxes used for more specific parenthetical situations than their curved-line counterparts. Let’s take a closer look at the occasions for which we would use brackets rather than parentheses.

Quick Rules: Brackets

Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common bracket errors associated with each one.

Brackets Rule 1.1 Put brackets around changes or additions to the wording of quotations.He clearly wrote that “The contract [was] for $1.2 million [CDN] over five years” back in 2012.
Brackets Rule 1.2 Don’t put brackets around what should have parentheses.There’s no law of physics (at least not technically) that keeps top athletes from running the 100m in under 9 seconds. (parentheses appropriate instead of brackets)
Brackets Rule 2 Put brackets around parenthetical elements within parentheses.We didn’t have a clue what was causing the issue (we scoured the troubleshooting manual [Brulé, 2012]), so they shut it down.
Brackets Rule 3 Put brackets around numerical in-text citations crediting research sources when required to use IEEE style.Cellphones are giving youth neck and back problems typically seen in much older people [1].

Extended Brackets Explanations

 

For more on brackets, see the following resources:

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5.3.7: Quotation Marks

Double quotation marks and single quotation marksQuotation marks are mostly used to set reported speech or text apart from the author’s words. They essentially say, “These are someone else’s words, not mine.” But some writers confuse double quotation marks (simply called “quotation marks” here) with single quotation marks, as well as misplace punctuation around quotation marks, so let’s focus on when and how to use quotation marks, as well as single quotation marks, properly. Since the absence of quotation marks when using research sources in your document can result in plagiarism (see §3.4.1 and §3.5.1), knowing how to use them correctly is vitally important to your success as a student and professional.

Quick Rules: Quotation Marks

Review the rules below on what to look for when proofreading and how to correct common quotation mark errors associated with each one.

Quotation Marks Rule 1.1 Use quotation marks to indicate reported speech or text.She said, “Put the G-8320 form on the shared drive,” not in your personal Dropbox, “so that it’s available to all the associates.”
Quotation Marks Rule 1.2 Use quotation marks in pairs to begin and end a quotation.
Quotation Marks Rule 1.3 Use a comma between a verb (or verb phrase) introducing a quotation and the quotation itself.
Quotation Marks Rule 1.4 Capitalize the first letter in a quotation unless it’s only a fragment of one.
Quotation Marks Rule 1.5 Place periods and commas before the closing quotation mark, not after.
Quotation Marks Rule 1.6 Place colons and semicolons after the closing quotation mark, not before.Like the main character in the 1998 Coen Brothers’ film The Big Lebowski, “the dude abides”; in other words, I’ll be compliant.
Quotation Marks Rule 1.7 Place question and exclamation marks before the closing quotation mark if they’re part of the quotation and after if they’re part of the sentence framing the quotation.I thought you were kidding when you asked, “How can I help?”!
Quotation Marks Rule 1.8 Quote exactly what’s between quotation marks; otherwise, use brackets to indicate changes made to words and ellipses for omissions.Prime Minister Trudeau insisted that “Bilingualism [was] not an imposition on the citizens. . . . [It was] an imposition on the state” (Problems of Journalism, 1966).
Quotation Marks Rule 1.9 Don’t use quotation marks around a paraphrase (a.k.a. indirect quotation).Prime Minister Trudeau insisted that the people were forcing two official languages on the country rather than the other way around. (no quotation marks around the indirectly quoted speech)
Quotation Marks Rule 2 Use quotation marks as “scare quotes” to draw attention to the way a word or phrase is used by others.You can’t simply “phone this one in” because too many people will be depending on you doing this right.
Quotation Marks Rule 3 Use single quotation marks only for reported speech within a quotation.The interviewer then asked, “What did you mean when you said, in 1997, ‘The great thing about the hockey world is that there are a lot of people with loose lips’?” (Fitz-Gerald, 2015).
Quotation Marks Rule 4 Use quotation marks around the title of a short work within a larger work such as an article in a magazine or journal, webpage in a website, chapter in a book, song on an album, short film or TV episode in a series, etc.The article “Bill Gates and Steve Jobs Raised Their Kids Tech-free—and It Should Have Been a Red Flag” (Weller, 2018) made me reflect on my own technology addiction.

For more on quotations, see §3.4.1 and the following resources:

5.3.8: Hyphens

Using hyphens between two or more words in combination helps the reader treat them as if they were one word when the words around them would create ambiguity without the hyphen(s). We do this especially with compound modifiers, which are two or more adjectives that modify the same noun in combination. For instance, if you said that there was funding available for small business owners, does that mean funding is only available for people who are under five feet tall? (In that case, “business owners” is read as a compound noun and “small” is the adjective modifying it.) If you mean that funding is available for business owners who employ fewer than 15 people, then you want to use the compound-modifier hyphen to pair up “small” and “business” so that they are read as if they were one adjective modifying the noun “owners”: small-business owners. Hyphens help the reader by guiding them toward what words to pair up when it could go either way.

The same is true of hyphens used in compound nouns. Saying, “It was a light year” means something completely different from “It was a light-year.” In the first case, you’re saying that nothing much happened that year; in the second, you’re saying that something spanned nearly ten trillion kilometres. Hyphens matter!

Extended Hyphen Use and Explanations

 

For more on hyphens, see the following resources:

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5.3.9: Long Dashes

For more on long dashes, see the following resources:

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5.3.10: Question Marks

Question marks obviously follow questions. However, if the question is a polite request for action rather than one where a Yes or No answer is expected—i.e., a rhetorical question—end the sentence with a period rather than a question mark (Jamieson, 2014).

For more on long dashes, see the following resources:

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5.3.11: Exclamation Marks

For more on exclamation marks, which should be used sparingly, see the following resources:

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5.3.12: Periods

For more on periods, see the following resources:

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Key Takeaway

Near the end of the editing stage, proofread for punctuation errors, such as comma and apostrophe misplacement, that would confuse your reader and embarrass yourself.

Exercises

  1. Go through the above sections and follow the links to self-check exercises at the end of each section to confirm your mastery of the punctuation rules.
  2. Take any writing assignment you’ve previously submitted for another course, ideally one that you did some time ago, perhaps even in high school. Scan for the punctuation errors covered in this section now that you know what to look for. How often do such errors appear? Correct them following the suggestions given above.

 

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