8.2: Incorporating Quotations

Learning Objectives

  • Identify how quotations can support your technical communication
  • Determine when and how to use quotations

Why Should You Integrate Quotations into Your Technical Writing?

Using direct quotations in your technical writing has several benefits:

  • It provides direct evidence from reliable sources to support your work.
  • It conveys your credibility by showing you have consulted relevant and authoritative sources.
  • It illustrates that you can extract the important/relevant content from a source and use it effectively in your writing.

However, be careful not to over-quote. Quotations should be used sparingly because too many quotations can interfere with the flow of ideas and make it seem like you don’t have ideas of your own. Paraphrasing can be more effective in some cases.

When and How Should You Use Quotations?

You should use a quotation in your technical writing

  • if the language of the original source uses the best possible phrasing, and no paraphrase or summary could be as effective;
  • if the terminology of the quoted content cannot be paraphrased effectively (e.g., in the case of content that includes stats, scientific terms, etc);
  • if the content in the quotation itself is the focus of your analysis or commentary.

Here are some tips for quoting effectively:

Tip #1: Don’t Quote and Run

When a quotation is used to illustrate or support a point that you have made in, for example, a technical report, you need to follow it with some analysis, explanation, comment, or interpretation about the quotation’s relevance. Never quote and run: don’t leave your reader to determine the relevance on their own. A quotation does not speak for itself; you must provide context and an explanation for quotations you use.

Tip #2: Integrate Correctly

It’s important to integrate a quotation correctly into your technical communications. The quotation should flow smoothly and fit both logically and syntactically. There are three main methods to integrate quotations grammatically:

Method A—Seamless Integration: In this method, embed the quoted words as if they were an organic part of your sentence (if you read the sentence aloud, your listeners would not know there was a quotation).

E.g., Researchers “report that low walls that block wind could actually help wind farms produce more power” (Conover, 2021, para. 1).

Method B—Signal Phrase: In this method, use a signal phrase (Author + Verb) to introduce the quotation, clearly indicating that the quotation comes from a specific source.

E.g., In the article, Conover (2022) states that, “A windbreak’s wake slows the flow of air as it travels farther through the rows of turbines” (para. 2).

Method C—Colon with Lead-in: In this method, introduce the quotation with a complete sentence ending in a colon.

E.g., Conover (2021) ends the article with this statement: “Future studies could investigate how this technique might apply in places where wind direction varies” (para. 4).

Tip #3: Edit When Necessary

When you use quotation marks around material, this indicates that you have used the exact words of the original author. However, sometimes the text you want to quote will not fit grammatically or clearly into your sentence without making some changes. Perhaps you need to replace a pronoun in the quote with the actual noun to make the context clear, or perhaps the verb tense does not fit. There are two key ways to edit a quotation to make it fit grammatically with your own sentence:

  • Use square brackets: To reflect changes or additions to a quote, place square brackets around any words that you have changed or added.
  • Use ellipses (three dots): To show that some text has been removed, use ellipses; they indicate that some words have been removed from the sentence.

Example: Use of Square Brackets and Ellipses

Have a look at how square brackets and ellipses can be used to edit content from this paragraph, taken from the Science News article, “Windbreaks, Surprisingly, Could Help Wind Farms Boost Power Output” by Emily Conover, published on August 10, 2021.

“But by striking a balance between these competing effects, windbreaks placed in front of each turbine can increase power output, new computer simulations suggest. It comes down to the windbreaks’ dimensions. Squat, wide barriers are the way to go, according to a simulated wind farm with six rows of turbines. To optimize performance, windbreaks should be a tenth the height of the turbine and at least five times the width of the blades, physicists report July 30 in Physical Review Fluids. Such an arrangement could increase the total power by about 10 percent, the researchers found. That’s the equivalent of adding an additional turbine, on average, for every 10 in a wind farm.”

Use of Square Brackets:  Conover (2021) describes the specifics of the design: “Squat, wide barriers [for the windbreaks] are the way to go, according to a simulated wind farm with six rows of turbines” (para. 3).

Use of Ellipses:  “Windbreaks … can increase power output, new computer simulations suggest” (Conover, 2021, para. 3).

TRY IT

Exercise 8.2.A: Practise Quoting

Read these three opening paragraphs from the Science News article “Why Kitchen Sponges Are the Perfect Home for Bacteria” written by Anna Gibbs and published on March 1, 2022. 

After reading the paragraphs, choose any part of this excerpt to practise quoting with the 1) seamless integration; 2) a signal phrase; 3) a colon with lead-in; 4) square brackets; 5) ellipses.

“Why Kitchen Sponges Are the Perfect Home for Bacteria” (paras. 1-3)

Ask bacteria where they’d like to live, and they’ll answer: a kitchen sponge, please.

Sponges are microbe paradises, capable of housing 54 billion bacteria per cubic centimeter. In addition to being damp, airy and loaded with food scraps, sponges provide an optimal physical environment for bacteria, researchers report February 10 in Nature Chemical Biology.

Just like humans, bacteria prefer different levels of interactions with their peers. Some bacteria are more social, while others prefer solitude. Lingchong You, a synthetic biologist at Duke University, and colleagues wondered how separating different types of microbes would affect their community interactions. They found that intermediate levels of separation — similar to that found in a sponge — maximize the diversity of the community.

References & Attributions

References

Conover, E. (2021, August 10). Windbreaks, surprisingly, could help wind farms boost power output. Science News. https://www.sciencenews.org/article/wind-farm-windbreak-turbine-speed-power-output

Gibbs, A. (2022, March 1). Why kitchen sponges are the perfect home for bacteria. Science News. https://www.sciencenews.org/article/sponge-kitchen-bacteria-microbe-diversity

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