Chapter 1: Drafting a Professional Email

Writing Emails

Most students and workers use email on a daily basis. While it may be used like text messaging, or synchronous chatting, and it can be delivered to a cell phone, email remains an asynchronous communication tool. In business, email has largely replaced print hard copy letters for external (outside the company) correspondence, as well as taking the place of memos for internal (within the company) communication (Guffey, 2008). Email can be useful for messages that have more content than a text message, but it is still best used for fairly brief messages.

Emails may be informal in personal contexts, but this form of communication requires attention to detail, awareness that your email reflects you, and a professional tone so that it may be forwarded to any third party if needed. Email often serves to exchange information within organizations. Although email may have an informal feel, remember that when used for business, it needs to convey professionalism and respect. Never write or send anything that you wouldn’t want read in public or in front of a supervisor or manager.

Tips for writing emails

If you’re struggling to decide what to include in an email, err on the side of not wasting the reader’s time. Many readers get hundreds of emails a day. Readers will usually spend only a few seconds scanning an email for relevant information before moving on to the next one.

Unless your email is sensitive or you are breaking bad news, it’s nearly always a good idea to state the main point of the email clearly and to clearly tell the audience what you want them to do.

It may be helpful for you to think of this as building a frame around your email. In the first part of the frame, you open by telling the reader why you’re writing. Then, in the body, you give the main message. In the bottom part of the frame, you end by telling the reader what to do next.

Here are some more tips for sending successful emails:

  • Proper salutations should demonstrate respect and avoid mix-ups in case a message is accidentally sent to the wrong recipient. For example, use a salutation like “Dear Ms. X” (external) or “Hi Barry” (internal).
  • Subject lines should be clear, brief, and specific. This helps the recipient understand the essence of the message. For example, “Reference List Assignment Question” or “COMM1048 Textbook Information.”
  • Close with a signature. Identify yourself by creating a signature block that automatically contains your name and business contact information. It is becoming increasingly common for businesses to add First Nations Land Acknowledgements to their email signatures.
  • Be brief.
  • Use a clear format. Include line breaks between sentences or divide your message into brief paragraphs for ease of reading.
  • Your email should have one purpose. If you find yourself covering more than one topic in your email, you should consider sending multiple emails so that your reader does not miss important information.
  • Reread, revise, and review. Catch and correct spelling and grammar mistakes before you press “send.” It will take more time and effort to undo the problems caused by a hasty, poorly written email than to get it right the first time.
  • Reply promptly. Watch out for an emotional response—never reply in anger—but make a habit of replying to all emails within 24 hours, even if only to say that you will provide the requested information in 48 or 72 hours.
  • Use “Reply All” sparingly. Do not send your reply to everyone who received the initial email unless your message absolutely needs to be read by the entire group.
  •  If you include a link, test it to make sure it is complete.
  • Announce email attachments in your message.
  • Give feedback or follow up. If you don’t get a response in 24 hours, e-mail or call. Spam filters may have intercepted your message, so your recipient may never have received it.

Sample Standard Email

To: Harriet Smith, Professor, Loyalist College

From: Prabhjot Kaur, Student

Sent: Monday, 10/25/2023 8:14 AM

Subject: Email Assignment – COMM1048

Harriet,

I am a student in your COMM1048 College Writing course and I have a few questions about the upcoming Email Assignment.

Which attachments would you like included on the email? I know that you would like a copy of our certificate, but was wondering if there is anything else you would like attached.  I am also wondering what the due date for the assignment is.

I appreciate your time and look forward to receiving your reply.  

Thank you,

Prabhjot

Prabhjot Kaur, Student, DSW Program

Loyalist College

(111) 222-3333 ext. 4444

In today’s job market, writing emails has become a means by which many people find employment.  Emails to prospective employers require thoughtful word choice, accurate spelling, and perfect punctuation.  Employers’ inboxes are inundated with countless emails daily.  If even the subject line of an email contains a spelling error, it will likely be overlooked and someone else’s email will take priority.

The best thing to do after you proofread your email to an employer and run the spell checker is to have someone go over it with you.

Test Your Knowledge

To test your knowledge, let’s edit the email that Philip sent at the beginning of the chapter.

 

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