Chapter 7: Writing Great Paragraphs
Supporting Sentences
Supporting sentences make up the body of the paragraph by explaining, proving, or enhancing the controlling idea in the topic sentence. Most paragraphs contain three to six supporting sentences depending on the audience and purpose for writing. A supporting sentence usually offers one of the following:
- Reason
- The refusal of the baby boom generation to retire is contributing to the current lack of available jobs.
- Fact
- Many families now rely on older relatives to support them financially.
- Statistic
- Nearly 6 percent of adults are currently unemployed in Canada.
- Quotation
- “We will not allow this situation to continue,” stated Mariam Brown.
- Example
- Last year, Terrence was asked to retire at the age of 55.
The type of supporting sentence you choose will depend on what you are writing and why you are writing. For example, if you are attempting to persuade your audience to take a particular position, you should rely on facts, statistics, and concrete examples, rather than personal opinions. Read the following example:
There are numerous advantages to owning a hybrid car. (topic sentence)
First, they get 20 percent to 35 percent more kilometres to the litre than a fuel-efficient gas-powered vehicle. (statistic)
Second, they produce very few emissions during low-speed city driving. (fact)
Because they do not require as much gas, hybrid cars reduce dependency on fossil fuels, which helps lower prices at the pump. (reason)
Alex bought a hybrid car two years ago and has been extremely impressed with its performance. (example)
“It’s the cheapest car I’ve ever had,” she said. “The running costs are far lower than previous gas-powered vehicles I’ve owned.” (quotation)
Given the low running costs and environmental benefits of owning a hybrid car, it is likely that many more people will follow Alex’s example in the near future. (concluding sentence)
